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Part 2/2 of my strawberry series.
First part is here: [link] model: me of course EDIT: HOLLYYYYYY CRAAAAAPPP!! MY FIRST DD!!!!!!! *o* thank you SOOOO much!! Big thanks to molecularlight who suggest me, and RockstarVanity who featured me! I NEVER THOUGHT I WOULD SEE THE DAY! I put in the right link this time, so part one of the picture should work. For those of you who dont understand the concept, try looking at the first picture of the series... maybe you'll get it then! Daily DeviationGiven 2009-04-20Vegetarian by *PURErube works the widescreen format beautifully with strong composition and vivid colours. (Suggested by =molecularlight and Featured by ^RockstarVanity) CommentsI really like this, it has some good emotion. However the only thing that bugs me, and I don't know it may be a pet peeve, is the hand. With where it's cut off it almost looks like it keeps going on an on. You know? Like you can clearly follow the lines of the head and your mind will fill in the rest. However the hand doesn't have the right angel of lines shown and so it almost gives the impression of going on an on.
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That I would have to say really well done yet very disturbing and also that I like it when he is eating a strawberry because it makes it look intantalizing to women!!
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That being said, I do have a small issue with the content itself. I really have no idea what you're trying to say to me with this image. At first it's gruesome, then light-hearted, then serious...there's no real, palpable emotional content to the image. One could argue that this isn't a problem, which I would agree with to a degree, but I think it does detract from the overall impact of the image just a bit.
In the end, a job very well done. Thank you very much for sharing!
If I was to to make a suggestion it would be go in tighter and make this a portrait composition - keeping the model slightly off centre. Only a suggestion though and I get the impression that the landscape format is very deliberate.
A great photograph - well done.
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