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Part 2/2 of my strawberry series.
First part is here: [link]

model: me of course

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HOLLYYYYYY CRAAAAAPPP!!
MY FIRST DD!!!!!!! *o*
thank you SOOOO much!!
Big thanks to molecularlight who suggest me, and RockstarVanity who featured me! I NEVER THOUGHT I WOULD SEE THE DAY!


I put in the right link this time, so part one of the picture should work.


For those of you who dont understand the concept, try looking at the first picture of the series... maybe you'll get it then!

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-04-20

Vegetarian by *PURErube works the widescreen format beautifully with strong composition and vivid colours. (Suggested by =molecularlight and Featured by ^RockstarVanity)

Critiques


:iconkironaoftheskies:
I'd like to start with saying that this really is a fantastic image, and well-deserving of the DD given to it. I was skeptical at first glance, but then I gave it a full view, and was happily proven wrong. The centering of the subject within the frame is surprisingly effective, and the vibrant colors really make it pop. The model's almost-smile facial expression is intriguing, and the subtle depth of field helps keep everything smooth and consistent.

That being said, I do have a small issue with the content itself. I really have no idea what you're trying to say to me with this image. At first it's gruesome, then light-hearted, then serious...there's no real, palpable emotional content to the image. One could argue that this isn't a problem, which I would agree with to a degree, but I think it does detract from the overall impact of the image just a bit.

In the end, a job very well done. Thank you very much for sharing!
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:icondensity-tmr:
This is excellent and very worthy of a DD. I think the white background helps to draw more focus onto the model and works well with the subject. I like the way the bandage is wrapped around the arm - it works much better this way than it would if it coverred all of the skin. The arm obscures the prefect portion of the face - I don't think this would work as well if it obscured much more. It also divides the frame in the prefect place. I think the baggy neck of the t-shirt works well with the whole atmosphere of the photograph.

If I was to to make a suggestion it would be go in tighter and make this a portrait composition - keeping the model slightly off centre. Only a suggestion though and I get the impression that the landscape format is very deliberate.

A great photograph - well done.
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:icontarniveen:
I really like this :)
:iconforever01n02:
I really like this, it has some good emotion. However the only thing that bugs me, and I don't know it may be a pet peeve, is the hand. With where it's cut off it almost looks like it keeps going on an on. You know? Like you can clearly follow the lines of the head and your mind will fill in the rest. However the hand doesn't have the right angel of lines shown and so it almost gives the impression of going on an on.
:iconsammiesu:
This is actually so amazing Rube, you never cease to make an impressive piece of work. :)

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but i don't care what they say,
i'm in love with you.
they try to pull me away, but they don't know the truth.

you cut me open & i keep bleeding, keep bleeding love.
:iconxlostartofamurderx:
It's awesome, I love it!<3
:iconpurerube:
thank you everyone <3

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-Ruberman
:icona-cat01:
cool! I like the composition. It would be nice if it were bigger though.

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"Build a man a fire, and he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life."
-Terry Pratchett
:iconsuicidemakeout:
ah you made your point :D
:iconred-wolf-ink:
That I would have to say really well done yet very disturbing and also that I like it when he is eating a strawberry because it makes it look intantalizing to women!! :P

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